Road to liberation!

on

Neither bumps nor ditches
Blind curves or turnings
I pause to ponder
The smoothness of my path

These last few miles
Extremely cosy
Trusting the road
I zoomed ahead

Happiness and sorrow
Success and failure
Parked either side
As I wave past them

Sans any baggage
I accelerate with peace
I think I’ve found
The road to liberation

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12 Comments Add yours

  1. saismruthi says:

    πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ Well written ☺️

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    1. Vijay says:

      Thanks 😊

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  2. She says:

    Some beautiful curvature of language to meet your needs. Nice job!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Vijay says:

      Thanks πŸ™‚

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      1. She says:

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      2. Vijay says:

        Will do surely

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  3. Enjoyed the simplicity of the language here. Really well evoked and thought-provoking.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Vijay says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚ Do check out my other posts too

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  4. Marion Njeri says:

    When I clicked the link I thought it’s a historical piece but hey! It’s a beautiful poem. I’m a poet too 😹😹
    https://marionnjeri.wordpress.com/2018/03/18/358/

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    1. Vijay says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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      1. Marion Njeri says:

        You’re welcome anytime Vijay

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